Extended edit 2000-3000 Words
Whether you’re polishing a short story, refining an essay, or preparing a submission sample, our manuscript feedback service offers detailed, insightful editorial guidance to help your work shine.
This package is ideal for writers working on prose up to 3,000 words—fiction or non-fiction—at any stage of development. Whether it's a standalone piece or the opening of something longer, we’ll give it the focused attention it deserves.
What You’ll Receive:
✅ A Comprehensive Editorial Report
We’ll provide a written critique covering key aspects of your work, including:
Structure & Pacing – Is the arc clear and engaging? Do we want to keep reading?
Voice & Style – Does your narrative voice feel authentic and consistent?
Characterisation – Are your characters believable, compelling, and well-developed?
Clarity & Flow – Does the writing feel smooth, or are there moments where readers might stumble?
Reader Impact – How does your story land emotionally and intellectually?
Suggestions for Improvement – Kind, constructive notes to help you elevate your work.
✅ Line-Level Feedback
We’ll highlight specific sentences or sections in your manuscript where the writing shines—or where it could be stronger. This might include edits to phrasing, pacing, transitions, or clarity.
✅ Grammar & Spelling Notes
If we spot consistent grammar, punctuation, or spelling issues, we’ll flag them and offer guidance to improve your technical polish.
✅ Marketability Insights
We’ll let you know how your piece might be received by agents, editors, or literary magazines, and—if relevant—suggest places to submit your work.
Why Choose Lemon Jelly Press?
We’re not just editors—we’re writers too. We know what it’s like to care deeply about your work, and our feedback is always encouraging, honest, and tailored to your voice. Our goal is to help you write with more clarity and confidence while staying true to your creative intentions.
We specialise in working with emerging writers, marginalised voices, and anyone who’s ever felt unsure about their writing. If you’ve been sitting on a story and wondering if it’s any good, we’re here to say: Yes! Let’s bring it to life, together.
Great for:
Writers preparing magazine or competition submissions
Those starting a novel and looking for feedback on the opening
Memoirists testing tone and structure
Students polishing creative coursework
Anyone who wants friendly, practical feedback from a small, independent press
Once purchased, you’ll be invited to upload your manuscript and share any notes or questions you'd like us to keep in mind. If you’d like us to focus on something specific—like structure, voice, or publishing potential—just let us know.
We can’t wait to read your work.
Whether you’re polishing a short story, refining an essay, or preparing a submission sample, our manuscript feedback service offers detailed, insightful editorial guidance to help your work shine.
This package is ideal for writers working on prose up to 3,000 words—fiction or non-fiction—at any stage of development. Whether it's a standalone piece or the opening of something longer, we’ll give it the focused attention it deserves.
What You’ll Receive:
✅ A Comprehensive Editorial Report
We’ll provide a written critique covering key aspects of your work, including:
Structure & Pacing – Is the arc clear and engaging? Do we want to keep reading?
Voice & Style – Does your narrative voice feel authentic and consistent?
Characterisation – Are your characters believable, compelling, and well-developed?
Clarity & Flow – Does the writing feel smooth, or are there moments where readers might stumble?
Reader Impact – How does your story land emotionally and intellectually?
Suggestions for Improvement – Kind, constructive notes to help you elevate your work.
✅ Line-Level Feedback
We’ll highlight specific sentences or sections in your manuscript where the writing shines—or where it could be stronger. This might include edits to phrasing, pacing, transitions, or clarity.
✅ Grammar & Spelling Notes
If we spot consistent grammar, punctuation, or spelling issues, we’ll flag them and offer guidance to improve your technical polish.
✅ Marketability Insights
We’ll let you know how your piece might be received by agents, editors, or literary magazines, and—if relevant—suggest places to submit your work.
Why Choose Lemon Jelly Press?
We’re not just editors—we’re writers too. We know what it’s like to care deeply about your work, and our feedback is always encouraging, honest, and tailored to your voice. Our goal is to help you write with more clarity and confidence while staying true to your creative intentions.
We specialise in working with emerging writers, marginalised voices, and anyone who’s ever felt unsure about their writing. If you’ve been sitting on a story and wondering if it’s any good, we’re here to say: Yes! Let’s bring it to life, together.
Great for:
Writers preparing magazine or competition submissions
Those starting a novel and looking for feedback on the opening
Memoirists testing tone and structure
Students polishing creative coursework
Anyone who wants friendly, practical feedback from a small, independent press
Once purchased, you’ll be invited to upload your manuscript and share any notes or questions you'd like us to keep in mind. If you’d like us to focus on something specific—like structure, voice, or publishing potential—just let us know.
We can’t wait to read your work.
Whether you’re polishing a short story, refining an essay, or preparing a submission sample, our manuscript feedback service offers detailed, insightful editorial guidance to help your work shine.
This package is ideal for writers working on prose up to 3,000 words—fiction or non-fiction—at any stage of development. Whether it's a standalone piece or the opening of something longer, we’ll give it the focused attention it deserves.
What You’ll Receive:
✅ A Comprehensive Editorial Report
We’ll provide a written critique covering key aspects of your work, including:
Structure & Pacing – Is the arc clear and engaging? Do we want to keep reading?
Voice & Style – Does your narrative voice feel authentic and consistent?
Characterisation – Are your characters believable, compelling, and well-developed?
Clarity & Flow – Does the writing feel smooth, or are there moments where readers might stumble?
Reader Impact – How does your story land emotionally and intellectually?
Suggestions for Improvement – Kind, constructive notes to help you elevate your work.
✅ Line-Level Feedback
We’ll highlight specific sentences or sections in your manuscript where the writing shines—or where it could be stronger. This might include edits to phrasing, pacing, transitions, or clarity.
✅ Grammar & Spelling Notes
If we spot consistent grammar, punctuation, or spelling issues, we’ll flag them and offer guidance to improve your technical polish.
✅ Marketability Insights
We’ll let you know how your piece might be received by agents, editors, or literary magazines, and—if relevant—suggest places to submit your work.
Why Choose Lemon Jelly Press?
We’re not just editors—we’re writers too. We know what it’s like to care deeply about your work, and our feedback is always encouraging, honest, and tailored to your voice. Our goal is to help you write with more clarity and confidence while staying true to your creative intentions.
We specialise in working with emerging writers, marginalised voices, and anyone who’s ever felt unsure about their writing. If you’ve been sitting on a story and wondering if it’s any good, we’re here to say: Yes! Let’s bring it to life, together.
Great for:
Writers preparing magazine or competition submissions
Those starting a novel and looking for feedback on the opening
Memoirists testing tone and structure
Students polishing creative coursework
Anyone who wants friendly, practical feedback from a small, independent press
Once purchased, you’ll be invited to upload your manuscript and share any notes or questions you'd like us to keep in mind. If you’d like us to focus on something specific—like structure, voice, or publishing potential—just let us know.
We can’t wait to read your work.
