In-Depth Editorial Report 3000-5000
You've poured your heart into your writing—now let’s give it the close, thoughtful attention it deserves. This feedback service is designed for writers who want detailed, constructive input on a longer piece of prose (between 3,000–5,000 words), whether it’s a short story, a memoir extract, or the opening of something bigger.
Perfect for submission prep, developmental feedback, or growing your creative confidence.
What You’ll Get:
✅ A Full Editorial Report
We’ll return a thorough, honest, and encouraging critique focused on:
Narrative Arc & Structure – Does the story flow naturally? Is the structure working for you or against you?
Voice & Tone – Are you hitting the right emotional and stylistic notes for your intended audience?
Character Depth & Dialogue – Are your characters believable, engaging, and consistent? Do their conversations feel real?
Pacing & Clarity – Are there areas that drag or feel rushed? Where might readers get lost or confused?
Themes & Impact – How is your message or meaning landing? Is your writing doing what you want it to do?
Suggestions for Development – Clear, personalised suggestions to help you push your work further, with kindness and clarity.
✅ Line-Level Feedback
We’ll also highlight key phrases, sentences, or passages directly in the manuscript that stand out—whether they’re working brilliantly or could benefit from a nudge in a new direction.
✅ Grammar, Spelling & Style Notes
We’ll flag any recurring issues with punctuation, syntax, or language use and offer guidance to help polish your piece to a professional standard.
✅ Market Awareness
We’ll give you some thoughts on how your work might be received by literary magazines, agents, or competitions, and suggest possible places to submit if appropriate.
Who It’s For:
Writers preparing longer stories, essays, or memoir extracts for submission
Novelists testing out the opening chapters of a book
Creatives looking for honest, developmental feedback to build skills
Anyone who’s ready to go deeper into the craft
At Lemon Jelly Press, we specialise in creative encouragement. Our feedback is always grounded, honest, and hopeful. We want to help you grow—not overwhelm you. You’ll leave this process with practical insights, clearer direction, and a renewed sense of confidence in your writing.
After purchase, you’ll be invited to upload your manuscript and share any notes, questions, or areas you'd like us to focus on.
We’re so excited to help you take the next bold step.
You've poured your heart into your writing—now let’s give it the close, thoughtful attention it deserves. This feedback service is designed for writers who want detailed, constructive input on a longer piece of prose (between 3,000–5,000 words), whether it’s a short story, a memoir extract, or the opening of something bigger.
Perfect for submission prep, developmental feedback, or growing your creative confidence.
What You’ll Get:
✅ A Full Editorial Report
We’ll return a thorough, honest, and encouraging critique focused on:
Narrative Arc & Structure – Does the story flow naturally? Is the structure working for you or against you?
Voice & Tone – Are you hitting the right emotional and stylistic notes for your intended audience?
Character Depth & Dialogue – Are your characters believable, engaging, and consistent? Do their conversations feel real?
Pacing & Clarity – Are there areas that drag or feel rushed? Where might readers get lost or confused?
Themes & Impact – How is your message or meaning landing? Is your writing doing what you want it to do?
Suggestions for Development – Clear, personalised suggestions to help you push your work further, with kindness and clarity.
✅ Line-Level Feedback
We’ll also highlight key phrases, sentences, or passages directly in the manuscript that stand out—whether they’re working brilliantly or could benefit from a nudge in a new direction.
✅ Grammar, Spelling & Style Notes
We’ll flag any recurring issues with punctuation, syntax, or language use and offer guidance to help polish your piece to a professional standard.
✅ Market Awareness
We’ll give you some thoughts on how your work might be received by literary magazines, agents, or competitions, and suggest possible places to submit if appropriate.
Who It’s For:
Writers preparing longer stories, essays, or memoir extracts for submission
Novelists testing out the opening chapters of a book
Creatives looking for honest, developmental feedback to build skills
Anyone who’s ready to go deeper into the craft
At Lemon Jelly Press, we specialise in creative encouragement. Our feedback is always grounded, honest, and hopeful. We want to help you grow—not overwhelm you. You’ll leave this process with practical insights, clearer direction, and a renewed sense of confidence in your writing.
After purchase, you’ll be invited to upload your manuscript and share any notes, questions, or areas you'd like us to focus on.
We’re so excited to help you take the next bold step.
You've poured your heart into your writing—now let’s give it the close, thoughtful attention it deserves. This feedback service is designed for writers who want detailed, constructive input on a longer piece of prose (between 3,000–5,000 words), whether it’s a short story, a memoir extract, or the opening of something bigger.
Perfect for submission prep, developmental feedback, or growing your creative confidence.
What You’ll Get:
✅ A Full Editorial Report
We’ll return a thorough, honest, and encouraging critique focused on:
Narrative Arc & Structure – Does the story flow naturally? Is the structure working for you or against you?
Voice & Tone – Are you hitting the right emotional and stylistic notes for your intended audience?
Character Depth & Dialogue – Are your characters believable, engaging, and consistent? Do their conversations feel real?
Pacing & Clarity – Are there areas that drag or feel rushed? Where might readers get lost or confused?
Themes & Impact – How is your message or meaning landing? Is your writing doing what you want it to do?
Suggestions for Development – Clear, personalised suggestions to help you push your work further, with kindness and clarity.
✅ Line-Level Feedback
We’ll also highlight key phrases, sentences, or passages directly in the manuscript that stand out—whether they’re working brilliantly or could benefit from a nudge in a new direction.
✅ Grammar, Spelling & Style Notes
We’ll flag any recurring issues with punctuation, syntax, or language use and offer guidance to help polish your piece to a professional standard.
✅ Market Awareness
We’ll give you some thoughts on how your work might be received by literary magazines, agents, or competitions, and suggest possible places to submit if appropriate.
Who It’s For:
Writers preparing longer stories, essays, or memoir extracts for submission
Novelists testing out the opening chapters of a book
Creatives looking for honest, developmental feedback to build skills
Anyone who’s ready to go deeper into the craft
At Lemon Jelly Press, we specialise in creative encouragement. Our feedback is always grounded, honest, and hopeful. We want to help you grow—not overwhelm you. You’ll leave this process with practical insights, clearer direction, and a renewed sense of confidence in your writing.
After purchase, you’ll be invited to upload your manuscript and share any notes, questions, or areas you'd like us to focus on.
We’re so excited to help you take the next bold step.
